Unreality
Unreality
poem by Elizabeth Langemak
art by Justin Hamm
For us, long distance, the plane lifts
its chin and tucks in its toes. To get to you
I jump skyward, headlong into air
as though it were beastless: no wind,
child-whimmed, no yellow breath threads
ready to dangle their signal to prayer.
Window-seated, looking down, hung
like a toy from a ceiling too vaulted
to see, it is hard to believe in the goodness
of space or even myself, in how any engine
or wingspan could lift these full seats
over my particular landscape
of faults. Over doubt. Belief is only
a comfort of earth and upward of earth,
a reality so thin the lungs cannot take it.
When I think of myself on this plane
bound to you it is hard not to feel
the sheer physics of risk, to measure
the thickness and strength of the walls
with a panicky eye, to imagine
the fuselage a fist that opens
over square fields, scattering us
like seeds that will not open. I buckle
my belt and try not to scream.
-refers from “She went up” in Cary Briel’s poem Shall I Go Up
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December 12th, 2010 → 10:19 pm[...] December 12, 2010 by Donna Vorreyer I finally had a chance this week to revisit Big Tent Poetry, and I picked a great week to do so. This week’s prompt asked readers to visit Referential Magazine and, following the mission of the magazine, create something new based on a piece of writing or art already present in their content. Here is my first draft attempt, based on a line from the poem “Unreality” by Elizabeth Langemak. [...]
Stacy Post
December 2, 2010
Powerful poem! I particularly like the lines, “hung like a toy from a ceiling too vaulted” and “the fuselage a fist that opens over square fields”. Vivid imagery. The intensity builds well. Good job!
jessiecarty
December 2, 2010
Glad you enjoyed it Stacy. We are very happy to have Elizabeth’s work!
Rose Hunter
January 13, 2011
This is lovely. This bit struck me:
or wingspan could lift these full seats
over my particular landscape
of faults. …
Dan Elman
January 13, 2011
Oh wow, I really love this photo! it almost seems as if it’s a landscape, and yet it’s a man-made object. Goes so perfectly with this gorgeous poem!
jessiecarty
January 14, 2011
It is such a happy accident when a poem and picture come together that weren’t planned that way